- Adding some details to the bags before the king
- Or just keeping the outline on the bags
- Having some of the elements having some outlines like the clock and the king.
- The color helps the scene with the forrest and the background is more effective.
- Maybe add a plus sign between the elements like the house and the donkey
- Maybe slightly abbreviate the scene with the brothers.
- Watch some of the background movement.
- The music sees a-lot louder compared to the narration.
- some scenes the lighting seems to add a glare.
Wednesday, October 30, 2019
Week 10 Inside of class
Today in class we did an anonymous critique with the class.
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